Second multi-draft

The first multi-draft was difficult because I struggled before I finally had a sense of direction.  There were several issues I wanted to discuss, but I had trouble narrowing it down to the one that 

a). I could best relate to and 

b). that could incorporate the ideas of Nickel and Dimed.

One of my goals was to not fret over incorporating the concepts of The Tipping Point into the paper as much, since it hindered my progress the last time.  Thankfully, the ideas from The Tipping Point linked more naturally to the topic I chose.

My second goal was to improve the speed at which I wrote the paper.  Fortunately, the writing process the second time did not take as long, since I felt more confident on the material.  Though I made sure the first paper also stayed within territory I knew, the second paper discussed topics I felt even more comfortable with, which may account for the flow for the second paper.